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God, what truly great lines: "shifting an ancient cathedral into a phantasmagoric dance of ancestry."

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This is my favorite poem. Thank you for seeing that line. It means the world.

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, beautiful !

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Thank you!

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Troy this was beautiful. Thank you for sharing your heart. Brought a tear to my eyes. I didn't know you wrote it for your father when I read it but I felt a father figure close by so to no surprise I saw it afterwards in Elena's comment. Thank you ✨

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Thank you for both the love and the support. This is definitely one I hold dear to my heart, and the poem the broke open the floodgates of writing again. Grief is a powerful messenger.

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Really beautiful! Thanks for sharing

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Thank you for taking the time to read it and message me! I appreciate you.

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Just beautiful--moving.

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Thank you. This is a special one to me.

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Dearest Troy. Tell us more. For whom is this written? Beautiful.

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Thank you, Elena. I wrote this on what would have been my father's 76th birthday. He had passed one year and five days before, so I chose his birthday as the day to spread his ashes beneath a giant sequoia that I love. The photo above is from that moment in December of 2020. I return to this place as often as I am able, to both celebrate his life and the love of nature that he embroidered my life with.

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wonderful. and where is that beautiful sequoia? n. cali?

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This sequoia stands in Crescent Meadow, in Sequoia National Park. It is only four hours from Los Angeles, but feels like a whole other time and place. I also love the redwoods of NorCal, and we try to get up to them at least once a year. The feel of a rainforest after years of living in a desert always seems to supercharge my soul. Have you visited them?

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I have visited them... i knew it. I've been to that exact tree. 1997. One of the most magical and important trips of my life.

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I love that! Yes, it's absolutely the kind of place that shifts us with wonder and awe.

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